PUBH 4900 Week 10 Recommendation Argument Example

Course	PUBH 4900 Capstone in Public Health
Week	Week 10
Paper type	Recommendation argument memo
Length	About 630 words, 4 pages
Format	Memo, APA 7 citations
School	Walden University
Program	BS in Public Health
Updated	October 2026

Free sample paper for PUBH 4900 Week 10

Memorandum

To: Capstone Committee

From: BS in Public Health Capstone Student

Date: Month Day, Year

Re: Four recommendations from the capstone's findings, and one it declines to make

The Finding the Recommendations Rest On

The capstone found no support in the published record for the idea that San Francisco's flavor restriction drove up smoking among high school minors. The only direct estimate (Friedman, 2021) used a survey wave reported to have been fielded in the autumn of 2018 (Liu et al., 2023), ahead of the January 2019 start of enforcement, a month in which only 17% of retailers complied (Vyas et al., 2021). Each recommendation below is tied to a specific part of that finding.

What this page is doingRestating the finding in three sentences makes it easy to check that each recommendation grows from it.

Recommendation 1: State the Timing When Citing the Estimate

Anyone citing the San Francisco estimate, whether advocates, opponents, journalists or researchers, should state that the 2019 San Francisco survey wave appears to predate enforcement. This follows directly from the capstone's central finding. It does not ask anyone to stop citing the study; it asks that its main limit travel with it. The original author's own correction on survey dates (Friedman, 2022) makes this a reasonable expectation.

Recommendation 2: Publish District Fielding Windows

The capstone found that public survey files identify each wave by year, not by the months in which students answered. The national 2019 survey alone ran from August 2018 to June 2019 (Underwood et al., 2020). For district surveys, the fielding window should be published alongside the data. The omission is what allowed a policy evaluation to misdate its post-period, and it was discovered only through a private inquiry (Liu et al., 2023).

Recommendation 3: Date Exposure by Enforcement, Not Adoption

Local evaluators should define a policy's start by the date it was enforced and, where available, by measured compliance, rather than by the vote or the effective date. In San Francisco, compliance rose from 17% to an average of 80% only after enforcement began (Vyas et al., 2021), and flavored sales fell sharply only with enforcement (Gammon et al., 2022). An exposure date set months earlier would misclassify the period in between.

Recommendation 4: Pair Youth Surveys With Supply Data

When a single district survey is the only measure of youth behavior, evaluators should check it against compliance and sales data. In this project, supply-side data were what revealed the timing problem. A finding of increased smoking alongside falling cigarette sales should prompt a second look before publication. The check costs little: compliance inspections are routine in cities that license tobacco retailers, and sales series can be summarized by month. Neither replaces a survey of young people, but each can show whether the period a survey covers is the period the policy was actually in force.

The Recommendation This Project Declines to Make

It would be tempting to recommend that other cities adopt comprehensive flavor restrictions like San Francisco's. The capstone cannot support that. It showed that one piece of evidence against such policies is flawed; it did not show that San Francisco's policy reduced youth smoking. Reviews of other local restrictions report favorable effects on availability and sales (Rogers et al., 2022), but that evidence lies outside this project's question, and borrowing it here would substitute the field's conclusions for my own.

Who Should Act

Recommendation 1 is addressed to anyone who cites the study. Recommendation 2 is addressed to CDC's survey program and to participating districts. Recommendations 3 and 4 are addressed to local health department evaluators, including San Francisco's, which already holds the compliance data that made this analysis possible.

Summary

Four recommendations follow from the finding: carry the timing caveat, publish fielding dates, date exposure by enforcement and pair surveys with supply data. A fifth, adopting flavor restrictions elsewhere, is declined because the evidence for it lies outside the capstone's question.

References

Friedman, A. S. (2021). A difference-in-differences analysis of youth smoking and a ban on sales of flavored tobacco products in San Francisco, California. JAMA Pediatrics, 175(8), 863-865. https://doi.org/10.1001/jamapediatrics.2021.0922

Friedman, A. S. (2022). Clarification and correction of survey wave collection dates in an analysis of youth smoking and a ban on sales of flavored tobacco products in San Francisco, California. JAMA Pediatrics, 176(9), 947. https://doi.org/10.1001/jamapediatrics.2022.2388

Gammon, D. G., Rogers, T., Gaber, J., Nonnemaker, J. M., Feld, A. L., Henriksen, L., Johnson, T. O., Kelley, T., & Andersen-Rodgers, E. (2022). Implementation of a comprehensive flavoured tobacco product sales restriction and retail tobacco sales. Tobacco Control, 31(e2), e104-e110. https://doi.org/10.1136/tobaccocontrol-2021-056494

Liu, J., Hartman, L., Tan, A. S. L., & Winickoff, J. P. (2023). Youth tobacco use before and after flavoured tobacco sales restrictions in Oakland, California and San Francisco, California. Tobacco Control, 32(e1), e118-e120. https://doi.org/10.1136/tobaccocontrol-2021-057135

Rogers, T., Brown, E. M., Siegel-Reamer, L., Rahman, B., Feld, A. L., Patel, M., Vallone, D., & Schillo, B. A. (2022). A comprehensive qualitative review of studies evaluating the impact of local US laws restricting the sale of flavored and menthol tobacco products. Nicotine & Tobacco Research, 24(4), 433-443. https://doi.org/10.1093/ntr/ntab188

Underwood, J. M., Brener, N., Thornton, J., Harris, W. A., Bryan, L. N., Shanklin, S. L., Deputy, N., Roberts, A. M., Queen, B., Chyen, D., Whittle, L., Lim, C., Yamakawa, Y., Leon-Nguyen, M., Kilmer, G., Smith-Grant, J., Demissie, Z., Jones, S. E., Clayton, H., & Dittus, P. (2020). Overview and methods for the Youth Risk Behavior Surveillance System: United States, 2019. MMWR Supplements, 69(1), 1-10. https://doi.org/10.15585/mmwr.su6901a1

Vyas, P., Ling, P., Gordon, B., Callewaert, J., Dang, A., Smith, D., Chan, B., & Glantz, S. (2021). Compliance with San Francisco's flavoured tobacco sales prohibition. Tobacco Control, 30(2), 227-230. https://doi.org/10.1136/tobaccocontrol-2019-055549

Reading the PUBH 4900 Week 10 instructions

Recommendation assignments ask students to propose actions that follow from their capstone findings. Instructors expect each recommendation to be tied to specific evidence from the project and addressed to someone who can act. Prompts often want a reason each proposal could actually be carried out. Memos generally present three to five recommendations with sources. Strong memos also name a recommendation the evidence does not support and decline it. Some sections ask for an implementation plan alongside the recommendations; others ask for a policy brief format. Instructors are alert to recommendations that appear in the final pages without support earlier in the paper, a common reason capstones lose credit. A table linking each recommendation to its supporting finding can help, especially when there are more than three. Some instructors also ask students to rank recommendations by urgency or cost and to say which one they would pursue first if only one were possible.

How this PUBH 4900 Week 10 example is built

The memo restates the finding in three sentences. Four sections each present a recommendation, link it to a specific finding and cite the supporting source. A section declines to recommend broader adoption of flavor restrictions and explains why. A section names who should act on each recommendation, and a summary lists all four alongside the declined fifth. Each recommendation is short and points to a single finding, which makes the link easy to verify. The declined recommendation is explained at the same length as the accepted ones, so the reader sees that restraint was a decision rather than an omission.

Where the marks sit in the PUBH 4900 Week 10 rubric

Recommendation memos are judged on linkage, specificity, feasibility and restraint. Linkage credit requires each recommendation to follow from the capstone's own findings. Specificity credit rewards naming the actor and the action. Feasibility credit comes from explaining why the action is achievable. Restraint credit requires declining recommendations that rest on evidence outside the project. Memos that address recommendations to specific actors, such as survey programs or local evaluators, show an understanding of who can act. Recommendations that ask for low-cost changes grounded in existing data are often rated more feasible.

Common PUBH 4900 Week 10 mistakes, and how to avoid them

Recommendations often repeat general advice from the field. For each one, point to the finding in your capstone that supports it. Name who should act. Explain why it is feasible. Then ask what you would like to recommend but cannot support, and say so. A free recommendation memo for your capstone can be requested. Keep each recommendation to a short paragraph so the link to evidence stays visible. Draft your recommendations, then cover each one and ask what finding in your capstone supports it. If none does, cut it or move it to a list of ideas for future research. Keep the declined recommendation; it shows judgment.

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PUBH 4900 Week 10 questions, answered

Where can I find a free PUBH 4900 Week 10 sample paper?

The full Week 10 recommendation argument is shown above, turning the flavor ban findings into four proposals for city and state officials.

Why should recommendations follow only from the capstone's findings?

Borrowing advice from the wider field substitutes others' conclusions for the student's own evidence.

Why publish survey fielding windows?

Without them, evaluators can misdate the period a survey describes, as happened in San Francisco.

Why date policy exposure by enforcement?

A policy may not change what is sold until it is enforced, as compliance data from San Francisco show.

What recommendation does the memo decline?

That other cities adopt San Francisco's restriction, because the capstone did not show the policy reduced youth smoking.